Wednesday, December 14, 2016

Writing a report
What are the differences between essays and reports?
In a report, it is vital that the information is clear and easy to find. For that reason, reports can make use of things not normally found in essays, such as:
·         dot points
·         headings and subheadings
·         tables, graphs and diagrams
In addition, there are other important differences between reports and essays:
Reports
Essays
Reports present facts/information, and the aim is to explain them as clearly as possible
Essays discuss perspectives on an issue, and the aim is usually to construct an argument for a particular point of view
Reports are written for the person or organisation that requested them
Essays are written for a lecturer and other knowledgeable people in the field
Reports will be scanned, so the most important information needs to be easy to find, and summarised where appropriate
Essays will be read carefully from beginning to end
Reports use short, concise paragraphs and dot-points where applicable
Essays link ideas together into a cohesive series of paragraphs, rather than breaking ideas down into easy-to-access pieces
Reports end with a conclusion and recommendations for actions that will address issues raised in the report
Essays end with a conclusion and sometimes predictions or suggestions for further research
1. Letter of Transmittal
This is a formal business letter to the person or organisation that commissioned the report “announcing” the completion and delivery of the report.  It usually includes:
·         A salutation (e.g. Dear Ms Watson)
·         The purpose of the letter (e.g. here is the marketing report you commissioned)
·         The main findings of the report
·         Any important considerations
·         Acknowledgement of any particular help
·         Thanks
For example:
Dear Mr Landry,
Enclosed is the report you commissioned on 12 May 2009 on the Tourism Industry on Peacock Island, NSW.  The main findings of the report are:
·         that the growth of the industry has been substantial (35% since 01 January 2009) due to the increased awareness of and interest in the peacock population of the island;
·         that the peacocks' nesting habits are beginning to be disrupted by tourism;
·         that tourism on the island needs to be carefully managed so the peacocks are no longer disturbed by the increase in human activity, and
·         that the government should consider placing some restrictions on tourist numbers and designating appropriate peacock viewing areas.
It should be considered that the Mayor of Peacock Island, Ms Annabelle Devereaux, was unavailable for comment throughout the period in which this report was being researched, so her input should be sought before any further decisions are made.
I would like to acknowledge the assistance of the Peacock Island Tourism Board, and particularly its Chief Administrator, Jan Stevenson, in writing this report.
Finally, I would like to thank you for the opportunity this report gave me to familiarise myself with the Peacock Island environment and its inhabitants, and to develop my research skills, which will be invaluable for future projects.
Regards,
Shyla Graham.
2. Title Page
This is the ‘cover’ of the report, which presents the key details in a professional layout.  Include:
·         The name of the report (i.e. the topic of the report)
·         The organisation that commissioned it
·         Your name (and student number)
·         The date
For example:
  
The Tourism Industry on Peacock Island, NSW, and its
impact on the native peacock population. 
 Commissioned 12 May 2009 by
Garry Landry, Native Animal Protection Agency
 Shyla Graham
21 November 2009

3.Table of Contents
The Table of Contents is important for allowing readers to quickly find the information they need. It should:
·         Show each of the numbered points and sub-points
·         Include page numbers for each
·         Include a list of figures if necessary
·         Include a list of appendices
·         Have a clear and professional layout
The numbering system used in reports will be unfamiliar to most students, but it follows a fairly simple pattern. Each main section has a number (1, 2, 3, etc.), and each sub-section within those main sections has a sub-number (1.1, 1.2, 1.3....).
See the example below:
1. Introduction...........................................................................................................1
2. Literature Review...................................................................................................3
     2.1 Impact of tourism on animal populations in coastal NSW and Victoria.................3
     2.2 Tourism management in coastal NSW and Victoria............................................5
3. Tourism analysis...................................................................................................7
     3.1 Tourism income analysis 2007.........................................................................7
     3.2 Tourism income analysis 2008.........................................................................8
     3.3 Tourism income analysis 2009.........................................................................9
4. Changing behaviours of peacock population on Peacock Island................................10
     4.1 Peacock Behaviour Report 2007.....................................................................10
     4.2 Peacock Behaviour Report 2008.....................................................................11
     4.3 Draft Peacock Behaviour Report 2009.............................................................12
5. Predicted long-term outcomes of no or minimal tourism management.......................13
6. Conclusion..........................................................................................................15
7.  Recommendations..............................................................................................16
8.  Bibliography.......................................................................................................17
Appendix 1 - Tourism Growth (2007-2009)..................................................................20
Appendix 2 - Peacock Behaviour Analysis (2007-2009)................................................21
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4. Summary, Abstract or Executive Summary
While your lecturers will certainly read your whole report (in order to mark it and give you feedback) in the workplace, reports are received differently.  Some readers will not wish to read the entire report, but only the parts relevant to them, so the summary, abstract, or executive summary presents the entire report in brief - generally on no more than one page.  Include:
·         who requested the report
·         the purpose
·         background/context
·         brief description of methodology
·         main findings, and
·         recommendations
Use paragraphs for an abstract and paragraphs/dot points for an executive summary.
Make sure the layout is methodical, working through each section of the report clearly and in order. 
5. Introduction
The introduction should clearly explain why the report is relevant/important.  To do this, explain:
·         Who commissioned the report and why
·         The context / problem that triggered the report, giving any necessary background information
·         The purpose of the report and its scope (i.e. what it does and does not cover)
·         The types of sources used (i.e. texts, surveys, observation, interviews)
6. Body
The body of a report will be made up of many different sections, each with its own purpose.  The body is where you will place:
·         The literature review (if applicable)
·         Research methodology – what you did and why, mentioning any possible problems
·         Findings – stating the facts clearly, and including labelled graphs and charts where appropriate
·         Discussion – your interpretation and explanation of the findings

7. Conclusion

In the conclusion, you should:
·         sum up your main findings and key points of discussion
·         make sure that you do not bring in any new information
·         be brief and to the point – you should already have reported on everything in sufficient detail
8. Recommendations
After ‘reporting’ on the present state of your particular topic, you need to make recommendations about what should now occur in response to your findings. While 'Recommendations' is often a section that stands alone, each recommendation can be sequenced within the body, after each relevant finding and discussion topic.
Make sure, however, that recommendations evolve logically from issues you identify in your findings, discussion and conclusions. They should be realistic, and achievable.
While lecturers may recommend a range of structures for the recommendations list, you can use the following sample structure as a guide:
This report makes the following recommendations:
·         that dot points or numbers are used to set out a recommendations list, so each recommendation can be seen easily;
·         that each recommendation begins with the word 'that', so as to align grammatically with the introductory sentence;
·         that each recommendation relates to problems or issues identified clearly in the report, and
·         that the recommendations are possible to achieve.
9. Reference List
Like a Reference List for an essay, a report's Reference List will be an alphabetised list of all the texts cited in the report.  This might include:
·         journal articles
·         books
·         other reports
·         websites
·         newspaper articles
·         interviews
Make sure you use the right referencing style recommended for your unit.
10. Appendices
Appendices are the place to include any data too bulky to place in the body of your report.  You might include:
·         your survey tool (but not all your responses)
·         raw data
·         any graphs or tables too large for the body
Make sure you:
·         number each appendix clearly (i.e. Appendix 1)
·         give it a title, so the reader can see what it contains at a glance, and
·         include it in the table of contents
In the body of your paper, you can then refer to this bulky data without having it interrupt the flow of the report.  For example:
In order to understand the impact of tourism on the peacock population, a two-year study was conducted from January 2007 to February 2009.  Data was collected from the tourism board that measured tourist numbers and tourist behaviour patterns in and around the peacock habitat (see Appendix 2),  and the peacock population was extensively monitored, with data collected on peacock numbers and behaviours, including feeding, nesting and breeding (see Appendix 3).
Notice that the appendices are attached AFTER the reference list.
Presentation and style are important in reports. First impressions count, so consider these simple tips:
Be professional, not pretty.  Fonts and images should only be experimented with if they help to present information more clearly.  Communication is more important than decoration.
Use plenty of white space.  Don't overuse long paragraphs, like those you would see in an essay.  Present information as succinctly as possible.
Use spacing, clear headings and a numbering system to ensure the separate parts of your report stand out clearly and are easy to locate
Use tables and figures (graphs, illustrations, maps etc) to clarify information - sometimes these are needed to supplement text.
Number each page - and make sure the page numbers are correct on the table of contents
Use consistent formatting
 What kind of language is used in reports?
Language should be formal language, but simple and clear.  Remember, the main aim of a report is clear communication.
By and large, sentences should be short, relieved when appropriate by some complex sentences.

·         Use sub-headings and dot points when appropriate, but also include paragraphs with topic sentences 
An easy to understand Online Writing Guide for beginning writers.  Here you will find a list of various writing models, general tips and hints to help guide you to writing success.
The big idea
Whenever you're asked to decide whether something is good or bad--and then explain why on paper--you're being asked to write a *review* or *evaluation*.  This is a valuable style of writing to learn, because even if you don't wind up writing book reviews for a living, you will still need to make big decisions as an adult about which car or house to buy, or which college to attend.  The kind of thinking you need to use in writing reviews is the kind of thinking you need to make intelligent choices in life.
Before you begin
Step One: Decide What To Look At
The first thing you need to do before you start your review is decide what aspects of the item you are going to evaluate.  What I mean is this: what is it that can be good or bad about something you're going to review?  An example: when you're watching a movie, you can look at the acting, the special effects, the camera work, or the story, among other things.  Those are all items you can examine and decide if they are well or poorly done.  With a book, you can look at the plot, the characters, and the way that the author puts words together.  With a restaurant, you can look at the food, the service, and the setting.  In fact, everything has qualities you can analyze and evaluate; you just need to sit down and figure out what they are.
Step Two: Decide What Makes Things Good or Bad
Before you can decide whether something is good or bad, you have to figure out what you mean by "good" and "bad." Do you like stories that have a lot of action or a lot of character development?  Do you like acting that's realistic or acting that's wild and nutty?  Do you like authors to use a lot of complicated words, or very simple words?  You decide.  Whatever you like, apply those standards to the thing you are reviewing.
How to do it
It is now time to start putting your essay together.  Here's a pretty simple format you can follow:
1.      Open with an introduction paragraph that does the following things:
o    catches the reader's attention;
o    identifies the thing you'll be reviewing (e.g., the title of the book or movie);
o    identifies the author, star, or director, if appropriate.
2.      Write a full paragraph about each of the aspects you want to examine, making sure each paragraph does these things:
o    opens with a topic sentence that says what the paragraph is about;
o    has several detail sentences that prove the point you are trying to make;
o    uses quotes or examples from the book or movie, if possible, to help prove your point.
3.      End with a conclusion paragraph that does the following:
o    *briefly* restates the main ideas of the review;
o    makes a judgment about the book or movie or whatever, saying whether it is good or bad (some reviewers give ratings, like four stars or two thumbs up);
o    recommends that the reader go to the movie or read the book or buy a meal at the restaurant (or not, if it is no good).
An example
Losing Joe's Place
by Gordon Korman
book review by Mr.  Klingensmith
It's not often that one finds a novel as wacky and as full of unexpected surprises as Losing Joe's Place, a book by Gordon Korman.  It is the story of Jason Cardone and his friends Ferguson "The Peach" Peach and Don "Mr.  Wonderful" Champion, and a summer they spend in the big city of Toronto, subletting the totally cool bachelor apartment that belongs to Jason's brother, Joe.  Joe's instructions to the three teenagers boil down to one main thing: DON'T GET EVICTED!  The story shows us just how hard it can be to follow this one simple direction.
One great thing about the book is the way Korman developed the characters.  Each person has a definite personality.  The Peach is an engineering genius who needs to improve everything he sees.  His "better than you are" attitude tends to get on everyone's nerves.  Jason, our hero, seems to be allergic to work, and while his roommates spend the summer slaving away at a variety of jobs, Jason finds ways to avoid job interviews.  At the same time, he becomes a genius in the kitchen, which helps him later on in the story.  Mr.  Plotnick, the boys' landlord and owner of the Olympiad Delicatessen, is one of the greediest and most annoying people you'll ever meet in a book, and the boys spend a lot of their time trying to find ways to get even with him.  Perhaps one of the weirdest characters in the book is Rootbeer Racinette, a huge bearded giant who can chew a hole in an unpoppable truck tire and take a two-by-four in the stomach as hard as you'd care to swing it.  Rootbeer spends the summer with the boys, taking turns getting the boys into and out of trouble (between bouts of Manchurian Bush Meditation and pursuing some of the strangest hobbies in the world).
Another great thing about the book is the plot.  Just as it seems that the boys are going to finally solve their problems and have a great summer, another problem arises that they have to solve, or else they will have to go back home to Owen Sound as the total failures that their parents expect: they run out of money more than once; they fight over the love of a girl they meet in Toronto, and they wind up becoming the secret restaurant kings of the city, all because of a chocolate memory.  Whenever you think that things can't get worse, they can, and the whole book builds toward the finish that you hoped couldn't happen...

Losing Joe's Place is a great book for anyone who likes to see somebody else have a whole lot of funny, funny troubles.  The story is hilarious and keeps you on the edge of your seat, and the characters are strange and interesting enough to make you want to know more about what will happen to them next.  Out of four stars, I would give this book at least three and a half.